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Post by princessbri on Sun Aug 17, 2008 8:53 pm

okay.. last year i was taking this creative writing class and everyday we had to write about a topic that was on the board.. heres one of our topics and heres the poem i wrote for it!!!

What is the sound of a promise not kept?

what is the sound
of a promise not kept?
it's the shatter of glass
against a wooden floor
the sceeching of your nails
against a chalk board
it's the sound of a nursery
when every baby is crying
the sound of a million mouns
when you know someone is dying.
can you please stop this sound
for it is very displeasing
because all of your promises
should be promises worth keeping.
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Post by mz.royalle20 on Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:03 pm

awwwww!!! that is soo good...&& soo true!
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Post by princessbri on Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:09 pm

thankz
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Post by Admin LaDonna on Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:21 am

WOW THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by mz.royalle20 on Mon Aug 18, 2008 1:03 pm

no problem girl! keep up the good work
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Post by Admin LaDonna on Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:42 pm

YEAAA KEEP IT UP!
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Post by mz.royalle20 on Sun Aug 24, 2008 12:54 am

I WISH I COULD WRITE POETRY!!
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